Death is amazing to some people.Death is sad for other people.
Some people just keep thinking what is death and why is it here.
Death is a soul catching experience. For you are dead but your soul is not!
Love the life you have don't give up on your life when you know your life is beautiful don't give up on it.
Death is just a new begging its a chance for you to start over from your bad life when you die u will get to go to the after life. See the rest of your family and people that have already went to the after life.
Don't worry the after life will be great only the begging will be painful knowing death is coming don't be afraid of death.
Become friends with death not fear him when you start to die go toward the light don't worry about it you'll have a good after life.
Some people just keep thinking what is death and why is it here.
Death is a soul catching experience. For you are dead but your soul is not!
Love the life you have don't give up on your life when you know your life is beautiful don't give up on it.
Death is just a new begging its a chance for you to start over from your bad life when you die u will get to go to the after life. See the rest of your family and people that have already went to the after life.
Don't worry the after life will be great only the begging will be painful knowing death is coming don't be afraid of death.
Become friends with death not fear him when you start to die go toward the light don't worry about it you'll have a good after life.
Nice job, Bailey. I think you could make your poem a lot more meaningful to the reader if you played around with commas, and where your lines end. Your 4th line could almost be split up into 4 separate lines to emphasize each thought. Good work. ~Miss Lewis
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