*Phone Rings*
Cody: Hello?
Dad: Cody?
Cody: Oh, hi dad.
Dad: How are you?
Cody: *Sigh* School sucks. Coach Dinatelli made me wear a girls uniform when we were playing flag footballl and I got into a fight because Pogostick and his friends were pushing around Frankfurter I broke some kids nose and Mrs. Casey knew I beat them all up but they lied for me and said they were having a benchwar and fell off the benches so now I have to teach them martial arts in my nieghbor Andys home gym and he's an army ranger but everyone is scared of me and the only reason Renee Carrington will even talk to me is because I set the mice free the sloppy joes at lunch are digusting there's some man in a ski mask digging up metal boxes in the woods behind the house and no one appreciates a fine Armani suit when they see one!
Dad: Cody, breath, and I have no idea what you're talking about but I have to go now, bye son.
Cody: Dad! *Dial tone* Ugh!!
Cody: Hello?
Dad: Cody?
Cody: Oh, hi dad.
Dad: How are you?
Cody: *Sigh* School sucks. Coach Dinatelli made me wear a girls uniform when we were playing flag footballl and I got into a fight because Pogostick and his friends were pushing around Frankfurter I broke some kids nose and Mrs. Casey knew I beat them all up but they lied for me and said they were having a benchwar and fell off the benches so now I have to teach them martial arts in my nieghbor Andys home gym and he's an army ranger but everyone is scared of me and the only reason Renee Carrington will even talk to me is because I set the mice free the sloppy joes at lunch are digusting there's some man in a ski mask digging up metal boxes in the woods behind the house and no one appreciates a fine Armani suit when they see one!
Dad: Cody, breath, and I have no idea what you're talking about but I have to go now, bye son.
Cody: Dad! *Dial tone* Ugh!!
Holy looooong sentence ladies. This can all be a single paragraph, but you still to organize and separate your ideas into sentences. I understand Cody is talking really fast, because he only has one minute, but you still need punctuation.
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