Dr.Martan Luther King J. was a great man. He beleved that everyone is equal and I agree. He also graduated at the age of fifteen. And came up with the civil right movement.
I beleve that the american dream is that every one is treeted the same. And that we should be thriveing and not suffring.
The obstcles that where in the way where that blacks had no rights and where not treated as people but like anamals.
He did alot of things for the civil rights movement.And he was a very smart person.
If M.L.K. saw the state of america now he would not be proud. The anly things he would like is our rights and that barack obama is president.
I beleve that the american dream is that every one is treeted the same. And that we should be thriveing and not suffring.
The obstcles that where in the way where that blacks had no rights and where not treated as people but like anamals.
He did alot of things for the civil rights movement.And he was a very smart person.
If M.L.K. saw the state of america now he would not be proud. The anly things he would like is our rights and that barack obama is president.
Rayne- There are two things I would like for you to address in your post.
ReplyDelete1. Spell check. You need to proof read your work before you make it public for everyone to see.
2. Sentence variety. You started 3 sentences with "and". Please correct these sentences.
~Miss Lewis